Speaking of reviews, I just received this one a few days ago from author Tracy Krauss: "This is definitely NOT your typical vampire tale. ...The book is written from an omniscient point of view, so we often see inside the heads of more than one person at a time. It doesn't distract, though, like head hopping might normally do. For some reason it seems to work and I think helps us have more sympathy for the victims. If you enjoy paranormal tales, you will like this book."
Another glimpse into the fire:
Perhaps the tiny girl could sense the terrible evil which stood over her
crib, perhaps not. However, as Vincent leaned closer to get a better look, she
began to wail and wriggle much stronger than before. Unfortunately for the
little girl, Mommy wasn't listening, nor could she do the littlest thing about
it.
The vampire reached into the crib and retrieved the frightened young
infant. Had she been a fish, he would have lost her as the baby tried to get
away from the form that she somehow knew was most definitely not family, and
certainly not Mommy. He held the child high above his head. Behind his purple
lips, gleaming fangs hungrily protruded from the corner of his mouth. Slowly,
confidently, they pierced the air between them on their way toward the baby's
warm, vibrating little throat.
The vampire has heightened senses: taste, smell, touch, sight and
hearing. All five are far more highly tuned to his world around him than that
of his victims. He has better vision than that of a hungry eagle in search of a
morsel from high above the forest. He can smell the presence of human beings
faster than the deer can smell a mediocre hunter. Not only can the vampire hear
a pin drop, but he can recognize the disturbance in the molecules as the pin
slices its way through the air toward the ground. In fact, just one of
these senses makes it impossible for the vampire to be taken by surprise.
Except by another vampire.
Therefore, when Nathaniel suddenly came out of nowhere and swept the
baby from his hands, knocking him into the far wall in the same motion; he
actually let out a cry of surprise.
Nathaniel replaced the baby in her crib and with but a touch quickly
pushed the piece of furniture safely behind him.
“Nicely done, Nathaniel. I wondered when you might show yourself,” he
added quietly, stepping away from the wall and running both of his hands
through his long hair in order to get it out of his face. “Cliché, I know, but
I taught you very well, indeed.”
“You taught me only to hate. And I hate you very much.”
Vincent sighed, and then took a threatening step forward.
“Remain where you are, Vincent!” Nathaniel commanded. “These are under
my charge.”
“Oh, but Nathaniel, surely you don't think me gluttonous. I will gladly
share them with you.”
Nathaniel made no effort to respond.
“Ah, but that is right,” he quickly interjected. “You don't feed on
human blood, do you, Nathaniel? Such a pity. Cats and vermin!” he said with a
dramatic shudder. “It makes you considerably weaker than I, you realize. In
that instance, I guess I will have both!”
“No!” Nathaniel stood his ground.
“I will not be ordered around, Nathaniel,” Vincent said firmly,
taking another step forward.
Nathaniel said nothing and made no effort to withdraw.
Two telephones began to ring in other rooms. No one acknowledged the
ringing.
Vincent stopped. “Ah, you mean to challenge me. I adore challenges. It
has been a challenge, my finding you. It has been a challenge following a cold
trail across the globe.” Vincent stepped closer. “And now that I have you…” He stared
his adversary down, menacingly. A moment later he reached out delicately with
his left hand and lovingly moved a stray hair out of Nathaniel’s face. He
whispered: “And I do have you, Nathaniel.” He lowered his hand back to his side
and changed his expression again, this time to a look of intimidation. Then, he
shook it off again.
“Just go, Vincent,” Nathaniel said, placing his hands on the back of the
little baby's crib. In the background, the phones continued to ring. “It is
still early. I trust you have more than enough time to acquire for yourself
another meal.”
Vincent sighed again and smiled, turning his attention back to the
nearest baby. They were each still screaming their lungs out, red-faced panic
on their tiny faces. Something in that scene coerced a giggle out of him.
“So lovely!”
He reached down into the nearest crib and gently and tenderly caressed
the skin of the baby boy's throat with his ugly discolored fingernail. The
infant recoiled at the touch and did his best to move away.
“So warm!”
Vincent pulled the hand away from the baby and then, glancing
dramatically into Nathaniel's eyes, stuck the caressing finger into his mouth
and licked the scent from it. Down the hall in the kitchen, Barbara’s voice
could be heard as the answering machine engaged.
“No more games, Vincent.”
Vincent turned his gaze back upon Nathaniel, his face devoid of
expression. He appeared neither pleased nor angered. “It is so good to hear you
speak my name again after all of these years.”
“It has been much longer than years.” There was a pregnant pause where
Vincent’s name should have followed, but Nathaniel refused to satisfy the
monster any further. “And not at all long enough.”
Next week, I'll showcase the new Flash Point cover in like fashion. The week after that will finally see the revealing of my new novel's fabulous cover. As you read this I am taking a break from the social networks and going over the edits for my paranormal romance, Seeing Ghosts. I can't wait to reveal that to you as well. It should be very soon. Dance on Fire can be found on Amazon where the e-book is only 99 cents.
We'll talk soon.
